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Lost in Your Eyes November 23, 2009

Posted by tantikris in poem.
I could see the stars glowing in your eyes,
in the way you look at me that made me feel so nice.
I could feel the peace when I see your smile,
the serene it brings stay longer in my heart more than  just a while.
I could see so much love shining in your eyes,
when you look at me even just a glance.
It said the words “I love you” that never came out,
but clearly understood as a silent shout.
We were so young and innocent when we fell in love,
blind and clueless  but I had my faith.
From the first time I knew you are the one that I love,
someone I would share all my life with.
Then we pledge our faithfulness each other,
wish that it will be last forever.
My tears were rolling when I heard you said your promise,
your eyes were hazy when you heard me said my promise.
“I take you as my wife – I take you as my man,
to have and to hold from this day forward,
for better-for worse, for richer-for poorer, in sickness or in health,
to love and to cherish, ‘till death do us part”.
Day by day, time goes by, we live our life,
our love stay still and safely keep alive.
Learning each other in many kinds of ways,
experiencing love in such a various ways.
It sometimes took us to a stormy weather,
it sometimes took us to a quiet stream.
It’s not like in the fairy tale love happily ever after,
but the happiness it brings is real more than I have dream.
I then realize how you translate your love to me,
by your caring rather than by words  that flattered me.
Often it expressed by simple acts but bring so many meaning,
or sometimes by funny things that made me laughing.
After so many years, still I can see so much love shining in your eyes,
sparkling when you look at me even just a glance.
How grateful we have each other, wish it never be apart,
let this feeling stay forever ‘till death do us part.
* The candid pictures were taken at Temple of Heaven, Beijing, October 23, 2009


1. DV - November 23, 2009

Iki lagi kasmaran apa karena hatimu masih tertinggal di Beijing tho? :))

Iki bagian terakhir dari trilogi Lost, catatan perjalananku ke Beijing, gitu looh… 😉

2. nh18 - November 26, 2009

Aku pikir Debbie Gibson … ternyata bukan …

eniwei …
Foto candidnya … touchy sekali …
Mungkin akan lebih greng lagi …
kalau kita bisa mengerti apa yang mereka bicarakan …

Salam saya

Bukan… bukan Debbie Gibson.. ini Tanti kok 😀
Hehe… saya juga penasaran kok, mereka berdua ini ngomong apa.. tapi kaya’nya seneeeng gitu berduaan… jadi ikut seneng deh ngelihatnya.

3. abindut - November 28, 2009

Ungkapan perasaan dari hati yang terdalam rupaya,… kok jadi bikin aku kangen ya… sama dia, hik…hik..hik.
Tapi mbak ada yang bikin aku ketawa sendiri nih, baca kalimat ini
“I take you as my wife – I take you as my man”
Jadi inget lost in classification deh…

Duh… kangen ya Bi?… ayocepet telepon, ato segera pesen tiket kesana? 😀
Hei… dua kalimat itu diucapkan secara bergantian bo’… oleh yang lelaki lalu oleh yang perempuan, hehehe… salah ya aku nulisnya…

4. daiSy - October 28, 2010

What a poem….! Make me so high…hope someday I will find the one…amien

Daisy : make your wish,keep in faith…. and you will find one. Amen

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